ASA Good Critical Review

A Reviewer whose Amazon moniker is gliderpilot1 has this to say about my novel A Subtle Armageddon:

A Subtle Armageddon, the first book in the Infinity Series, presents readers with a dystopian future where true human sentiment is absent. Despite minimal or no dialogues, the main character embarks on a journey of self-discovery and learns profound lessons from the natural world, offering a thought-provoking exploration of good intentions gone awry.

One of the unique aspects of the book is its portrayal of a world where human learning should be impossible, yet the characters defy these limitations. The author's imaginative depiction of how nature can instruct even the most hardened individuals is enlightening. Throughout the narrative, the sublime descriptions create a vivid and captivating atmosphere, immersing readers in this highly imaginative world.

Although dialogue is scarce, the well-developed characters engage readers through their actions and experiences. Witnessing the main character's transformation from emotional neutrality to one capable of growth and learning adds depth to the narrative. The author's favorite excerpts vividly convey tension and emotion, demonstrating their ability to create an immersive and emotional reading experience.

A Subtle Armageddon contains spiritual undertones that are intertwined with the storyline. While not necessary, a general knowledge of C.S. Lewis might enhance readers' understanding of certain elements within the book. The underlying rationale and thought-provoking themes encourage contemplation of dependence, independence, and the interconnectedness of all things.

While the book has its strengths, it also has a few limitations. The absence of significant dialogues may detract from readers seeking more character interactions. Additionally, the pacing occasionally falters, affecting the overall momentum of the narrative.

Readers will appreciate the inherent optimism, unexpected twists, and profound learning moments. A Subtle Armageddon is a well-written and thought-provoking page-turner that blends spirituality, imagination, and intriguing characters. It offers a unique perspective on the significance of human sentiment and our relationship with the natural world.

I wish that all reviewers would give feedback such as this. He touches on both the strengths and weaknesses of the book. I can tell that he actually read it; too many reviews are simply without enough body to be helpful for me as a writer, or potential readers. Their reviews are perfunctory. Although gliderpilot1 only gave me 3 stars out of 5, I appreciate his comments on a much deeper level than what others have said who gave me more stars.

I don't agree with everything gliderpilot1 says (the intentions of the controllers in ASA were most emphatically not good). Still, reviews such as his are far more valuable than any one or two sentence throw off. Thank you, friend.